You can point out many things, but everything I say has already been said before.
I think the biggest mistakes are:
1) Weak self-control.
2) A careless attitude toward learning.
3) Predictability — bluffs and value bets are read too easily. There is no novelty, no creativity, the same lines over and over again.
My own mistakes:
1) I constantly risked my bankroll by playing far above my limits, and of course I paid the price for it.
2) Learning poker away from the table and on your own is quite difficult, and many people don’t take it seriously enough. Most players simply don’t study because it’s hard — and that’s a huge mistake.
3) Since a beginner doesn’t know much yet, their understanding of the game is very limited. There is almost no real strategy — about 95% is intuitive play. That’s why it’s so readable.
No disguise, no element of surprise.
From the betting patterns alone, you can already tell:
AK, AQ, AA, KK, JJ —
bluff or value,
flush or air,
one pair or better.